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First part of the first project for my Identity Design class. I also have to make a postcard, business card, tearsheet, envelope, and a letterhead.

Let me know what you think!

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:iconoloranya:
I'm not sure about the arrangement. I think your first and last name should either not eb touching, or be fully connected, not sorta-kinda-touching.
:iconbluenigma2:
Thanks for the input! I planned on playing around with this more, just wanted to see what people thought of this initial concept first. <3

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Technology is the art of arranging the world so we do not notice it.
:iconlady-az:
i'm inclined to agree with nicole up there... but i don't know much about text. >3> i feel like it would be cool if the straight vertical lines of the "a," "k," and "r" all lined up and connected... but that might be really cheesy in actuality, because i am certainly no designer. ^^; but i do like the direction in which it's heading- i like the font and i like the variation in boldness. ^^

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"Bother," said Pooh, as Piglet came back from the dead.
:iconbluenigma2:
Thanks lady! I appreciate your input as well, I will definitely keep all this in mind.

I just hope I can make this look good @_@

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Technology is the art of arranging the world so we do not notice it.
:iconlady-az:
i'm sure you will. you has the talents and the work ethic. <3

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"Bother," said Pooh, as Piglet came back from the dead.
:iconbluenigma2:
Awww, thanks! *hugs*

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Technology is the art of arranging the world so we do not notice it.
:iconxluvablecutie:
I like this, but i also agree with nicole...also though maybe have your first name regular and your last name bold or the other way around, giving more contast other then having it all look the same. I dont know- you do what you want lol just suggestions, take them as you please my dear!! :)
:iconbluenigma2:
i appreciate your feedback, m'dear. i'll take all of this into consideration. <3

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Technology is the art of arranging the world so we do not notice it.

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